Painting for a show at the end of April. This is one piece that will be included. It's a 5x12. Finding a composition that works for this size is challenging. Feel it needs a few "tweaks". Want to play down play some areas of red so that other areas can sing. I'll live with it for a week or so and then tackle the few changes that will allow me to call it finished. Comments are welcome.
4 comments:
Love the vertical format and detail which is amazing for how small it is!
Sure the show will be a great success.
I will make one comment and one only. NO tweaks. It is just great the red drawas the eye to the centre and then gently lets them go. How I wish I painted so well.
Very nice. Great use of the space, and marvelous coloration. The only thing I might note (and please take this with a grain of sugar/salt!) is that the white highlighted alcove wall on the right is a bit wider at the top than the bottom, giving a very slight leaning appearance. The other verticals and horizontals throughout are all spot-on.
This is WONDERFUL, Kelley!!
I know what you mean about "living with it for a week"... but somehow I doubt you'll find much if anything that your mind tells you to change.
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